Saturday, April 17, 2010

चाँद ज़मीन पर उतर आया है!

जब से तुमको देखा है,
ऐसा लगता है जैसे चाँद ज़मीन पर उतर आया है!
रोक ना पाया इस दिल को,
क्या कोई अपने इस दिल को बहला पाया है!
क्या मेरे इस
दिल के दर्द को कोई आजतक समझ पाया है?

तुमने मेरे इस दिल को बहुत तडपाया है,
बहुत कोशिश की इस दिल को बहलाने की,
क्यों कि आजतक इस प्यार को कोई समझ नहीं पाया है!
इस तरह तुमने नज़रे घुमाके हमे देखा है,
ऐसा लगता है जैसे चाँद ज़मीन पर उतर आया है!

पहले रात के शामियाने में मै आकेला रहता था,
आज उन्हें उसी चांदनी में सजा हुआ पाता हूँ,
और इस तरह दिल से एक आवाज़ निकलती है,
कि मेरा चाँद ज़मीन पर उतर आया है!

मैंने हिम्मत करी उन्हें मनाने की,
पर उनमे हिम्मत थी इसे ठुकराने की,
मेरी हिमाकत को उन्होंने रुसवा कर दिया,
जैसे मेरे सपनो ने मुझे रुसवा कर दिया!

हिम्मत नहीं हारी मैंने क्यूंकि उनका मुखड़ा दिल मै बसाया है,
फिर हिमाकत करूँगा उन्हें मनाने की,
क्यों कि बहुत चाह है मुझे उन्हें अपना बनाने की!
या खुदा मदद करना मेरी,
क्यूंकि मेरा चाँद ज़मीन पर उतर आया है!

मेरे इस
दिल के इज़हार को
उल्फतो ने दिल का दर्द बना दिया,
फिर क्यों मुझे शक हो रहा है की क्या
वाकई मेरा चाँद ज़मीन पर उतर आया है?

22 comments:

  1. Wah ustaad, wah! lovely!! What words, what expression..Heart touching! Keep writing, we'll keep loving :)

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  2. Dats a gr8 text man.... btw u really wrote dis?? must have taken days 2 complete dis one...GUD Wrk ...

    Aditya

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  3. Hey, I hardly expect such a thing from you(to be honest). Good use of words.

    I liked it. Keep up the good work.

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  4. very nice words


    indeed

    don't give up
    all the best for your himaakat

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  5. ale baba le......
    kahi she chulai to nai.....

    i dnt think dat u'v written it.....
    batao batao kisse mari.....

    wellll......
    tis really very good.....
    m surprised by ur side.....

    keep writing, n v'l njoy....
    hahahahahaaaaaaaa

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  6. viola!!!! u will be surprised to know that i understood ur poem, totally!!!!gr8 going su!!!i m really proud of u and u knw y m saying this :)!! Well thought, well written and well expressed that completes it!!!

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  7. Nice poem Samrat. Good work, keep it up. I hope you get your chaand soon :-)

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  8. Good Work Mr.Nema
    But willing to know about your inspiration of writing this poem............
    well keep writing

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  9. Good one Sam, as you have surprised all of us by writing such a good stuff in Hindi now I would be waiting for some lovely poems from your side in English also...Keep Posting!!!

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  10. raat ke shaamiyane main ! absolutely amazing samrat . Its seems that romance and elequance does run through your veins !

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  11. Hazaro ki ginti to nahi aati par khayal kuch aaisa hai, book publisher hota to puri kitab tumhari panktiyo se chapva deta...........
    Good piece of writing keep it up

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  12. You actually wrote this????
    way to go sam! good work..

    Devika

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  13. HEy Samrat, tere chand ko bolna kabhi kabhi Nilgiri boys' hostel ka chakkar lagaya kare. Yaar , bijli bahut jati he bhai. Zameen pe aa hi gya he to kuch kaam b ho jaye.
    Hehe, kidding.

    Good lines, but you somewhere got entangled in Rhyme scheme mismatch. Anyways , it appears you have lately found interest in Poetry. I have read work of some good poet friends of mine who evolved writing poems,starting with the same types as you have started with( what I believe).And that shows that it was originally scripted by you. Good. As you prosper with the art, you will certainly enrich your usage of words which still is good. But with time and more efforts you will certainly be able to write the ones having nuanced renditions and intense expressions.

    Keep going , keep

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  14. Nice blog....
    Good poem with expression, at last you got your CHAND.
    Keep on himaakat, you will get success.

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  15. Dear Samrat,

    Nice blog yaar. Enjoyed reading it. You really have a thing for poems don't you.

    Regards,
    Shoaib Qureshi
    http://soyasays.blogspot.com/

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  16. Very good Poem Samrat.
    It was a great pleasure to read your heart tuching poem. Keep on writing.

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  17. Great its was nice to hear Urdu from you. I am glad to read it

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  18. GEHRAI par GEHRAI diye jaa rahe ho SAMRAT babu .....Good work man ..!! KEEP GOING.

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  19. Hummhh..I never knew that boy calling "Chanda Mama" has started calling someone's face as "Chaand" :).

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  20. Oh my God!!! What is this ....I never thought you r a poet... and that to Hindi was a surprise.....Good efforts !!!!

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  21. You' re a speaker of great eloquence!!! :) :)

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  22. Solid man.. Ur Poetry is getin better n better.. Cheers!! :)

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